Terribly sorry did I miss something, could you possibly highlight those constructive criticisms your flapping about.. As I said, a voice over is something that would make it more captivating and was a very valid and constructive point. However as you so carefully pointed out with your midis of literary skills, this is nothing groundbreaking (I haven’t made space on my shelf for a pencil). Humbly, I accept this a crass effort, but it was never meant to be anything more. I will even go as far to even agree that the “hits” argument is partially inactive. Although I will say that the majority of my hits have sprung from links. Links, may I add to blogs from all over the world (hence my pinch at fatty) and 90% of them because they like it

i admit there was an element of spin (i just can't help myself). however you lot do like to bitch.

"give me some room, nurse.... defibrillator...... stand clrear......."

"time..... 2.55pm"

To be honest its nice to get so much attention! we put it together in about half an hour. A voice over would have been lovely. i couldn't agree more, but it would have to be the right voice over and you would be amazed at how many girls sound rubbish on a recording. we actually put some music it to, taken from the sound track of jonny briggs... but allas we had already posted this version onto youtube. Much to our supprise the hit rate just went bannanas.

Which, to be honest, is all that matters. (we must have done something right as now we have over 27,000 hits in just two days)

One thing that you guys do seem to be forgetting, is that this is a spec ad and how far this idea could be taken. Dare i say it, alternative media spin offs, ambient medias, inserts.... i'm not saying that this viral doesn't need a little bit of tweeking. in advertsing there is no room for lack of vision, the inn is already full.

So everybody just dismount a second, what hell, lets tell a few jokes. you guys need something to lightening up.